As Replacements is no longer the work in progress, it became time to, shall we say, find a replacement. What is a girl to do, then, when she needs a project?
She goes demonic. And with majesty.
After weeks of getting Replacements ready, it was time to bring out the big story: Her Demonic Majesty. With a cover on the way, and Harper Voyager out of the way, I’m free to publish Demonic Majesty as I see fit. As such, last night began the almost final leg of this novel, nearly two years in the making.
The editing is out of the way, but getting into Chapter One again, and what do I find? A couple of typos. Which pissed me off because I wonder: did HV see those few errors and think, “What a tool. The reject pile for her!” One can never tell, because Harper Voyager will keep their secrets, and they gave me no pointers when they told me, “Next time, Chickiepoo.”
But the editing is minimal; it’s the formatting that’s important. What does one do to get a story ready? Let me tell ya–
First I bring up the “Show Hidden Marks” in the document. When you’re formatting for an ebook, you need to make certain there isn’t a space at the start of a paragraph. This does strange things to your document once it becomes an ebook, and you only want strange in your stories.
I don’t have to worry about en and em hyphens, because I have Scrivener take care of that while writing. En hyphens are found when you’re writing something like “New York-to-London-to-Paris,” and em hyphens are used when you’re separating clauses–like that. Since I learn how to use character codes to put them in place in my story, I never worry about this part, I only double check to make sure something didn’t get messed up while writing.
I then check for three words that I don’t want to use. First is the word, “So” at the beginning of dialog. It’s never a good thing to have your characters saying, “So, you’re going to . . .” because it sounds a little awkward. Then I check for “Suddenly”, and in, “Suddenly, the word appeared in a sentence!” Whatever is appearing is appearing right that minute, so unless it’s creeping into view–which you’ll point out in your writing–don’t tell your readers it’s there suddenly. Lastly, I look for “Very”, because very is a bad word. Very is soft; very is weak, very–as was pointed out in Dead Poets Society–will not get you laid. So be done with it, and use a word that is far, far better.
After that I need to set up my Table of Contents, but since Scrivener allows you to create .mobi fills for ereaders, I’m going to play with that and see if it builds one for me. It’s not hard to do, just time consuming. When that’s done, you set your title, set your last page, and then . . .
Then you upload and put it, as Freddie would say, in the lap of the gods.
If all goes well, I’ll have Her Demonic Majesty published by the end of May. Maybe before, because with Memorial Day weekend then, too many people will be out and won’t be around to buy the book. I wouldn’t want to deprive them of the joy of purchasing my first novel.
It’s coming. No more tall.
It’s really happening, and soon.