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The Revise Side of Life

I know some of your are thinking you’re going to pop in here and discover a whole lot of stuff about these rune dreams I’ve been playing up the last couple of days, and that I’d have a whole lot of stuff word counted and ready to go for NaNo.

What I do have is a whole lot of almost nothing.

You see, it’s like this:  first, I had a hook up with some of my online friends.  They just happened to be in the area where my Panera is located (and should I be saying “my Panera”, but that makes me sounds like too much of a regular.  Well, the woman taking my order did have my ice tea glass ready to go . . .), and I couldn’t say no.  Right?  Right.

They even brought me a scarf.  Can't say no to that.

They even brought me a scarf. Can’t say no to that.

We were talking and talking and having a great time, and by the time they left for home I was there started to write–oh, and I had to post picture to the Internet.  I had to.  Don’t try to say no, Cassie, you didn’t have to, because you don’t know how the Internet works, do you?

So I make it home and someone I used to work with calls.  She needs someone to talk to because she’s suffering from depression and she’s looking for advice, looking for some comfort, looking for a hand to hold.  Given my life and my struggles, I’m not gonna say no, I gotta get to work on my novel.  I listened and we chatted and that was all there was there.  It’s an obligation one has to the human race that when you’ve received help from one person, you pay it back in kind for another.  That’s what I did, and I do hope I was able to help, and that the advice I gave put my friend’s mind at ease.

Now, I have been writing, but not a lot.  I mean, I hit five hundred words at Panera before I shut things down, but that’s not even NaNo Stylin’, if you know what I mean.  I’ve got maybe forty minutes to get my butt in gear and at least pop the word count over a thousand, perhaps get Annie’s rune dream written and get the kids talking about what it means.

Nope.  There’s a frantic PM waiting for me on Facebook . . .

Without going into any great detail again, a project for a group I’m part of went belly up due to someone’s sick computer.  Well . . . guess who was asked if they could step in and get the project going once more?  If you said, “Peter Capaldi”, because right now he’s got free time on his hands and would probably enjoy something like this, you’re wrong.  Oh, so wrong.

Tonight I have a lot ahead of me.  I need to start getting this new project together, which I can do while I’m waiting for dinner to cook.  Nothing fancy, just collect the data and getting into a Scrivener file.  Then, after I eat, jump on the novel and start getting the word count up.  I’ve less that fourteen thousand words to go to hit my fifty, I have ten days to get that done–and I’ll probably lose two of those days to travel to and from Indiana.  That means for the remaining days I need to get my two thousand words a day in, while also getting the new project edited–

Good thing I’ll not be doing much when I’m home.  Except seeing my therapist on Monday.  And visiting with a friend on Tuesday.  And Thanksgiving.

Yeah, I can do it.

And since you’re all so nice to me, here’s the opening scene for Annie and Kerry getting ready to rune.  Enjoy.


All excerpts, this page, from The Foundation Chronicles, Book One: A For Advanced, copyright 2013, 2014, by Cassidy Frazee)

Kerry flew his Espinoza over the southeastern shore of Lake Lovecraft, quickly cleared the body of water, and brought his broom to a hover in the clearing forming the northern shoreline. Annie hopped off as soon as her toes made contact with the ground, with Kerry joining her a few seconds later.

As he was propping his PAV against a nearby tree, Annie considered how accurate Deanna’s instructions had turned out. Kerry had asked about what happened with her, and he grew quiet when she told him they’d speak on the way back to the Great Hall. He’s listed to Annie when she told him what she was told about discussion the rune dreams, and offered the suggestion that he fly them there rather than walk. Since Annie knew his Espinoza could carry two people, and that he was a good enough pilot to have her ride passenger, she agreed to his proposal. And given that it was unseasonably warm—even now, a little after seventeen hours, it was twenty-seven Celsius—there was no need for them to change out of their uniform into something warmer.

Annie still felt uneasy about discussing her dream, but the more she considered the news that Kerry had a vision—one that Deanna said would tie into her dream—the more she agreed with the seer that a dialog was needed. In six month Kerry and she had progressed greatly in their relationship, but something remained between them, and Annie knew it was her unanswered questions about what they’d had together for years before—well, whatever it was happened in June last summer.

She wanted Kerry back—all of him. She wanted him to remember everything. Though it was possible her dream and his visions might push him away, the possibility existed that it would bring him closer—

She’d know in a few minutes.

Kerry stood facing Annie, positioning himself so she would have been on his left were they side by side. Even Annie had come to do this without thinking, keeping Kerry to her right. She didn’t think it strange or unusual that they did this, though she was aware that it was another thing that others spoke of often . . .

“Well, here we are.” Kerry looked around as if he expected someone to pop out of the tree line. “All alone.”

“Yes, we are.” Annie knew they were alone, and only one person mattered to her. “I don’t see any reason to delay this—”

“I don’t either.” He reached into his pocket and withdrew his rune. “I guess I’m as ready as I can get.”

Annie pulled hers from the small purse where she’d kept it since their first weekend at school. “As am I.” She transferred it to her left hand and slowly held it out for Kerry. She watched him do the same, ready to drop it in her right hand. “Ready?”

“Yeah.” He opened his hand and let his rune fall into her hand as Annie’s did the same. There was a moment where nothing happened—then both children recoiled a step as the enchantment that had held their tongues in check for six months vanished.

Annie closed her eyes for three seconds and let a wave of vertigo pass, while Kerry shook his head several times. Annie feared there was more happening with Kerry than losing the enchantment. “Are you all right?”

“Yes. Just—” He held the back of his hand against his forehead. “That was pretty strange.”

“Yes, it was.” Annie waited until Kerry appeared to return to normal. “Do you—remember anything?”

He shook his head as he stared at his feet. “It’s like it just came to me. Like it’s always been there.”

“I feel that, too.” Annie swallowed hard. “I suppose we should . . . start.”

Kerry chuckled. “How do we do that?” He gazed off over the calm lake. “Who goes first?”

It was a point that Annie hadn’t brought up during their walk from the Witch House. “I was told to go first.”

Kerry noticed Annie wasn’t her normal assertive self. “You okay?”

Annie wanted to admit she wasn’t comfortable, but she knew that wouldn’t help the situation. “You’re going to keep an open mind?”

“I always have for you—” He tightened his grin. “Haven’t I?”

“You have.” She let out her breath slowly. “This is what I saw . . .”


NaNo Word Count, 11/19:  736

NaNo Total Word Count:  35,464

15 thoughts on “The Revise Side of Life

  1. It’s good to know you’ve been busy with other things . Keep a neat balance between mundane life and your passion for writing. ❤

    Hey, I can wait. Take your time. I waited more than 10 years for JK Rowling to get it done. I've been reading Skip Beat for 7 years, with just one episode coming out once a month. 🙄

    Anyways, back to the story……. I didn't know two can ride on one broom, or is it just the Espinoza? * yeah, Kerry, your loving girlfriend gave that to you , top of the line.. how lucky can you get " :/

    Oooops, sorry for taking a jab at Kerry. 😈 :p

    Cheers, Cassie. 😎

    • A long time ago it was mentioned there was room for two–another of those throw-away lines. And he is lucky–and he knows it.

      You’ll be happy to know I wrote Annie’s dream over my break.

      • Well, I think I know what Annie’s dream is. I ‘d bet my Pokemon collection it’s similar to Kerry’s ero dream, and I’m sure Kerry would be glad to know he’s not the only one who’s having these ” inappropriate ” thoughts. 😉

        I’m really interested to know what Kerry’s rune dream is. 😐 I have a feeling Annie doesn’;t figure in it. 😕 It’s the same as his teacup vision. So, yeah, he’s lucky, and he knows it. 😡

        Poor Annie. And I have a feeling she kind of knows too. But I’m not sure about that. 😕 I have no clue on her teacup vision, but it was bad enough that it shook her and made her tremble.

  2. I keep wanting to read more of the tasty little bits you’ve written, but after reading only a one, I’ve been intentionally skipping them because I want to buy and read the whole thing when you’re finished and read it cover to cover! I’m your newest s̶t̶a̶l̶k̶e̶r̶ fan! What part of Indiana are you going home to? I lived in Indianapolis / Lebanon from 2000-2007. As someone who has also struggled with severe depression, I’d like to thank you for being the stellar human being that you are, and caring enough to take time out of what’s clearly a very hectic time for you to help a fellow sufferer. The world could stand to have more people like you in it!

  3. Part of what makes you such a great writer is your passion and compassion; yes I made a rhyme, though not intentional. Though I would love to have read about their dreams (I woke up and made coffee and then the first thing I did was check to see if you’d posted–I’m becoming a bit obsessive about Annie and Kerry–just so you know, only the best books do that to me.)
    So glad you could be there for the people who need you. Lately, I’ve been feeling like I’ve not been there enough for some of those I care about, and i know it’s because I’m overwhelmed and stressed out myself, but that’s no excuse. So I’m off to send my daughter a much overdue little note.
    Thanks for reminding me of what’s important–this week has been a doozy and I needed the reminder.

  4. Such a tease! 😛

    Glad you had a great time with friends and hoping everything worked out with the other two situations.

    I have some catching up to do, which I hope to knock out next week maybe? We’ll see. Thanksgiving’s coming up, isn’t it? Crap…

    I’m sure your trip home will be good. Just stay safe. Weather’s being weird!

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