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The Short Suppositions

So here we are, the final post of 2014, but the penultimate writing for The Novel That Wouldn’t End.  But that’s not true anymore, either.  Sitting here on the cusp of a new year, there are seventeen remaining scenes, split among five chapters and two parts.  And once those are finished, then it’s The End time and I can take a bit of a rest and figure out what comes next.  There’s also the possibility that I’m going to add one last scene, because the final scene in the novel is really two-in-one, and I do love splitting that stuff up.

The funny thing is I don’t remember writing a lot last night.  Getting into Google Docs and having a friend help with editing another project I’m working on, yeah, that took a while, but when I comes to the novel it didn’t seem like I wrote a great deal–and yet, there’s two thousand and sixty-six words in the scene, and that’s not something to brush aside.

But what were those words?  Questions asked by Erywin, questions answered by Helena, and, it would seem, and understanding between them of what may lay ahead for my kids.

None of this are happy thoughts, but then what are at this point?

 

All excerpts, this page, from The Foundation Chronicles, Book One: A For Advanced, copyright 2013, 2014, by Cassidy Frazee)

Erywin took a long, deep breath before asking her next question. “Any news on Ruth?”

“According to the people who were doing clean-up, the woman you fought was her doppelgänger. They’ve checked up on her family and they’d fine—mother, father, younger brother, all still alive. She probably left in a hurry from home just like fake Kaden did.” Helena shook her head. “As far as the real Ruth is concerned, we’ll never see her again. The Deconstructors are good at disposing bodies: they either dissolved her after leaching as many memories as they could from her, or dumped her in the middle of nowhere.” She slipped her hand from Erywin’s and folded both in her lap. “I figured a team’s looking into the matter now, and by this time tomorrow Ruth McRoberts will have never existed.”

Erywin hated hearing such news. “Such a waste. The girl has one year of school with Tanith, and for that she dies. Not to mention I hate it when women join up with the Deconstructors—”

“Our struggle stopped being the matriarchy verses the patriarchy a long time ago, my dear. May as get used to the fact there are as many pissed off female witches these days as there are male who aren’t buying into what The Foundation is offering.”

 

Just as they would have done had Kerry and Emma died, it looks like the Guardians are going in and “harmonize”, as they would say, the McRoberts Family with the new reality.  You don’t have a daughter; you never did.  And everyone who ever knew her will forget she existed.  Maybe Tanith will remember her, but she’ll never know that the girl she was talking to the day before she met Annie and Kerry was an impostor.

Also, in that last statement from Helena, you get a tiny glimmer of The Foundation/Deconstructor brouha.  Is it really as simply as a battle between the genders?  Hum . . . you’ll probably find out if I ever get around to writing the third novel.

Something else is on Erywin’s mind . . .

 

“True.” Erywin had been carrying a question since they arrived at the CDC, and she needed it answered. “Why didn’t they attack the children right away? Why did they wait?”

“Could be any number of reasons.” Helena had wondered about this as well. “Best answer I can come up with is miscommunication on the Deconstructor’s part. When Tanith left early fake Kaden probably didn’t check with fake Ruth to see when they were suppose to get together. He probably then told the third member of the party to get over to the mall and get some eyes on Tanith, and by the time he got there Annie and Kerry had already hooked up with Tanith and were on their way to the park.” Helena crossed her legs. “That would explain fake Kaden leaving in a hurry: once they realized there were Foundation witches with Tanith, there was a need to get everyone on site in a hurry. And then the kids went invisible and silent, you were laying low, so . . .” She shrugged. “They threw up blocking spells and waited for everyone to show themselves.”

 

Deconstructors:  Bad Guys You Don’t Want Planning Anything.  And there is some truth here, because they don’t have a huge network, they don’t have centralized headquarters, they seem like a bunch of mopes involved in a rear guard action.  Which, we all know now, can screw up a modern army pretty well if you plan your hit and runs effectively.

Something pushes Erywin’s buttons, however, and it would appear that the Deconstructors moved into KC about a month before Team Salem showed.  As Erywin points out in a passive-aggressive way, that was about the time they were called into action.  So one might assume . . .

 

Erywin sighed before standing up. “Walk with me, please.” As soon as Helena was along side, Erywin began speaking in a low, confidential voice. “Tell me you had no idea we were going to run into Deconstructors.”

“No mentions what so ever, and I didn’t have anyone coming to me with secret information.” Helena stared straight ahead. “You saw the same reports I saw.”

“I believe you. I know you’d never lie to me, and if there had been evidence of Deconstructors, we wouldn’t have gone.” Erywin stopped near a small line of trees and stared out over the lake. “But I think someone in San Francisco knew. I think they were aware of what the kids could do. And . . .” She exhaled a long, low sigh. “I think they wanted to throw those kids into a situation where they’d have to do everything they could to stay alive, and they’d use everything magical they had to make sure that happened.” She frowned. “It seems they got their wish.”

 

If the Guardians are good at watching and manipulating, then one might stand to reasons that they knew there was a good chances that a throw-down was inevitable.  I mean, if you suspect you’ve got a couple of wonder witches working for you, it’d be a shame to let their powers and skills go to waste, right?

And what does Helena think?

 

Helena slowly reached out and took Erywin’s hand. She held it in silence for about fifteen seconds, just staring out over the lake with her partner and companion. “I believe that, too. I know the Guardians too well, and even though everything seemed on the up-and-up . . . it appears that everything was leading to the three of you confronting the Deconstructors.”

Yep–she’s got the same sinking feeling.  Probably even more so for her, because she not only knows the sort of buttholery the Guardians can employee, she helped put the kids on the firing line.

Which leaves my two witches having these last thoughts:

 

Erywin said nothing, allowing the quiet of the CDC campus gather around them. “What happens now?”

“Now?”

“Are the Guardians going to keep after them until they bring them into the fold?”

Helena shrugged. “Why wouldn’t they? They kept after me, didn’t they?”

Erywin snorted. “Yours was a different situation; they knew what you were from day one.”

Helena’s dark eyes shifted just enough that she could take in Erywin’s profile. “Yeah? What the hell makes you think they haven’t known the same about those two?”

 

That’s right, Helena:  plant that kernel of doubt that maybe the Guardians have known something for a while, and this was their way of proving it.  The situation was different with Helena–her grandmother did work for the Guardians, and though it’s never said, her mother works for them as well–and Helena was pretty much learning to kill at an early age.  It could be said that the Guardians have had their eye on Annie for a while, but Kerry?  Well, he did have the fortune of living right in the Guardian’s back yard in San Francisco for a few years, and they picked up on him pretty easily, so . . .

I’m not saying.  At least not right away.

Act Three is currently just over seventy-six thousand words–

That'll do quite nicely, now, won't it?

That’ll do quite nicely, now, won’t it?

–And by the time I’m finished with tonight’s scene with Annie and Kerry, it’ll be closer to seventy-eight thousand.

We’ll see, won’t we?

31 thoughts on “The Short Suppositions

        • But Annie and kerry should hone their skills more, not thrown into battle so early … I mean, it doesn’t make sense. they will lose a lot of potential great witches this way. Know what I mean ?

          • It is true. Then again, there were a couple of combat-ready witches with them, so they probably figured nothing could happen. But, yes: when it look at it that way, it does seem as if someone was being totally callous.

            On the other hand, if they make it through . . .

          • I think two things that speak volume are (1) a Guardian team showed up pretty fast after everything start. If you check my time like, it was like a minute after everything went to hell. And (2), Helena’s revelation that *she’d* never been to the CDC Foundation hospital, but Annie and Kerry go there first time out? Hummm . . . I wonder what’s *in* that hospital?

            Makes one wonder if the Guardians were ready for the worst case scenario.

        • If Helena was there, no competition. Maybe Helena had no idea it would turn out this way. But here’s the thing…. The Deconstructors started working on Tanith a month ago….the same time helena was informed about Tanith and Kansas and what she needed to do. It seems Helena was not told about the Deconstructors simultaneously working on Tanith and Kaden. In other words, Helena and the group were not informed of other stuff… that there might be an “ambush “. Because, however I see it, it is an ambush .

          • Helena would have pulled the plug if she knew: she’d already said that. And the only reason she didn’t when Ruth showed up was because she still wasn’t sure, so like she said, we’re the team, we do this job.

            Probably why she is feeling a little down at the end, because she’s feeling like she was duped as well. And a duped Helena is not a happy one–and she never forgets this: never.

        • It’s mindblowing that the Guardians knew there would be an ambush. They knew Annie and kerry would would walk right into it. I am wondering if “someone ” was watching while this was happening, and kerry was about to be killed ?

          • Well . . . you don’t really “know”, do you? 🙂

            At the moment it’s all supposition. Just like wondering if Ruth was a Deconstructor. Believe me, there’s something coming up in the third novel, concerning Patterson Gap, that’ll make this little adventure seem like window shopping at the mall. Guardians play hard.

        • I don’t know if Ruth was just a normal friend of tanith’s whom the Deconstructors had picked to be replaced by a Deconstructor. Otherwise, I’d think the Deconstructors have their own training school that train witches as young as Ruth.

        • Sure, you do. You can go into any field of work you want. BUT! Given what they just saw, think of the “incentives” The Foundation might give a student to direct their energies towards a certain field.

          • I don’t know what other “incentives ” they could give an already super privileged Annie, especially if the incentive could cost her her own life. The girl is princess-like.

          • Even a princess likes an adventure now and then. 🙂 If you noticed, though, Annie did seem to enjoy being in KC, and probably not just because of Kerry. She appeared to enjoy playing Guardian in Training.

          • Oh, sheeesh,. Now we have a , like, a bored rich girl who has everything in life, and now seeks some dagerous adventure to give spice to her life. :/ I guess the result was unexpected. I remember it was Annie who agreed in a second. If indeed it was Annie’s immediate decision, well, she just had kerry almost killed. Well done, Annie, well done.

          • She’s far more complected than that. She seems to enjoy her life, loves what she does, and doesn’t wear pink on Wednesdays. 😉 There’s one line in there that really does speak to her mind, where she’s thinking that she’s always wanted to be a sorceress. And she didn’t know they’d get into that mess. If anything, Kerry was the one who originally put himself in danger, back in November, and came through the fire, with Annie being worried most of the time. Maybe she felt at the time he shouldn’t do that, but she never stopped him. Remember she told him, “I won’t be the one to tell you what to do.” If he followed her, it was of his own free will.

          • I love ” she doesn’t wear pink on Wednesdays”. XD

            So, is it only Helena and Erywin who know about this mission? Does the headmistress know, or at least is aware they are into some Guardian business ?

            * sigh * I know… later.

            It’s already fast – paced. My interest in finding out what happens next is on over-drive. Ack ! ! !

          • Well, we KNOW the Headmistress knows there was a mission: Helena would have told her. And the Headmistress was aware it was probably going to happen because Helena filled her in. Isis would know, because when they were first testing, Kerry had the “backdoor software” that Isis gave. She probably didn’t know WHAT the mission was, but that they were doing stuff with Guardian overtones. And now, lastly, Coraline probably knows as well considering she more than likely got a call from the CDC about transferring patients.

            Notice that all three are the top admins at the school, and all three know how to keep secrets.

            Beyond that, everyone else got a cover story. They were even told to gaslight the ones who knew they were going out, just to get them used to not taking about it.

            Again, no one else KNEW where they were going or what they were doing. They just knew it was Guardian work, and they’d be off campus that weekend. Beyond that, nothing else.

      • To be honest, I’m super angry at the Guardians ( at least those in the know ) for putting helena, et al, in harm’s way…. not because Helena couldn’t protect them, but , they could have at least informed Helena what was gping on.

  1. Happy New Year. As usual, you have motivated me to write and to rethink my storyline. I went from basic ideas when I first started writing my novel and reading your story to being inspired to take it to a whole different level. That level and then some, has pushed me to be a better writer. So I’d just like to say think you for writing such a great story, for being such an inspiration, and for showing me how much is possible with your outlines, pictures, timelines, etc. I feel like I’m right there in your story–exactly how I want to feel when I read a book.
    You rock!

    • Thank you very much. And keep in mind–I didn’t write for a long time because I didn’t believe I could. What I do now is work, but it makes the story telling go quickly. It’s really a pleasure to help where I can.

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