After 275,000 words, it was two years ago yesterday that one of my kids said something that forever changed his life.
This scene in the novel . . . this is one I’ve had in my mind for a long time. Though, originally, it appeared way differently: locations, reasons, appearances, things said–they’ve all be altered, because that’s what you do with a story as you go along. Particularly if you’re had months to think about a scene before you get around to writing said part.
I also approached this scene with a little trepidation because–you’ll see. You’ll see in a bit.
Annie and Kerry are outside now; Annie for the first time in over twenty-four hours, as she tells Kerry. It’s a cool and crisp morning–
With this in mind, with Kerry in his hoodie and Annie in her thick sweater from home, designed for that mountain climate she lives in, they decide to stay outside . . .
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