One of the things I find I enjoy is being drawn to something I’ve done in the past, and discovering new ways to bring it out and bring it to life. It’s not something I do because I’m just a nitpicker for detail, but more because I find that the detail helps me see how something should be laid out creatively.
For example, going through Kolor Ijo, I see in great detail how much my style has changed over the year. I know if I went and started reading over Suggestive Amusements, it would probably look even more different. Though I can remember some of the things I’ve written after that–just a couple of things–and I’m not sure if the style has changed that much, but I do realized that after writing through much of 2012, by the time 2013 rolled in I’d started developing a bit more as a writer, and for 2014–well, it goes without saying my style changed a great deal, because I spent all that year working on one piece, and I’d decided before I started writing I’d change up one thing–no “he said/she saids” to anchor dialogue–and I went through that whole project doing just that.
Now I’m onto something else. I’ll get back to Kolor Ijo, but first . . . I’m going to let you in on some secrets . . .
I’ve posted this information once before, a while back, but in one of the future novels Annie and Kerry take off–I mean, literally, they take off and go around Europe on their own. I mapped out the route a long time ago, and it looks a little like . . .
It looks like they are visiting a lot of places, and they actually are, but a lot of that trip is flying. Now, back in late 2011, I figured out the time they spent flying, but frankly, I don’t want to go over that document again, and I’m guessing some of it is, shall we say, suspect?
However, if you have a map, and you know how to figure out time, well . . . why not time line this?
That’s what I started doing last night. I thought I can not only track how long it takes to hit certain points, but I can track time on the ground as well, and even figure out how long they are in certain locals. For example, lets look at the first leg of the trip.
This is how I lay things out. First, I know how long they are on tour, which is the first line in sorta red. It’s basically six weeks on the road and in the air, with points in between. The purple lines are the checkpoints, the amount of time spent in the air between landings. And the green are Annie and Kerry doing something, whether it’s chillin’, thinkin’, or having a holiday in Roma. I can take the points above and affix them on the map–
And you can see, they first stop in Lushnje for an hour, then fly a short distance to the edge of the Adriatic Sea, then zoom across to Italy. Once over dry land, they head for Naples, take a right at Vesuvius, and turn northwest towards Rome, where I have them sightseeing for two days, but I may change that up once I have the line more plotted out.
And there’s detail on these remarks as well:
You can now see that they left Annie’s house at seven-thirty, and arrived in Rome a few minutes before five PM, or seventeen hours. They covered 1079 kilometers, or 670.5 miles. They were taking their time, because in other detail I have them flying about 140 kph, save for the leg where they flew over the ocean, and then they kicked it up a bit. That’s the nice thing: they can get a lot of speed out of their equipment, so if they’re in a real hurry, it’s like taking a jet to wherever they want to be next.
Yes, it’s a lot of detail, and it’s a bit of work, but once this is done I’ll have it close to me, and I can make adjustments to the line whenever I am in the mood. Nothing is really written in stone, and if I want them looking around somewhere for a while, they can. And I can even map out a few side trips they’ll take, such as when they’re in Milan and Barcelona, and add them to this mix.
There you are: my little side project while I finish this–
Four chapters to go, and I can probably get through two of them tonight, and leave the big one for tomorrow. Not bad for just working on my own.