Since last time we met there wasn’t a lot of writing going down–unless you count all the note taking I was making for my recap of the pilot of Fear the Walking Dead, which comes out later tonight my time. No, after writing seventeen hundred words for the novel, and another fifteen hundred words (for notes, mind you) for my recap, I was all storied out.
What I did was look at the novel and think about structure change, because I’m nuts like that. I see something and I usually want to leave it alone, but just as I did with A For Advanced, I tinkered with it a bit after I had a much better idea of where the novel was going. So you do reach a point where you can look at layout and structure and think, “Now, this would look much better as a stand-alone . . . something.”
That’s what I did with Chapter Thirteen. I gave it a look, realized that the first three scenes fit together, and then looked at the last few scenes and realized they really were a completely different beast altogether. So I did this:
The last three scenes of Chapter Thirteen became Chapter Fourteen, meaning Thirteen ended with Kerry flying through the air with the greatest of ease–but unlike Annie, who doesn’t need a broom to fly, his landing wasn’t so great. That’s where I make a break and put in the new Chapter Fourteen, because it’ll open up with someone we know waking up in Bed #2, Bay #1–I don’t believe I’m giving away too much of a spoiler. That was where I put the last three scenes of the old chapter–
But now there are four scenes, so what gives, Cassie? Check the time line in the image and look at the title, and remember what Mea Culpa means, and you may figure out what’s going on. Let’s just say that scene is needed, and it’ll help draw to a close something that’s going on. Sort of. Because nothing ever ends here at Salem.
But this wasn’t the only changing I made. I went in here, too:
The now Chapter Sixteen is the still the first chapter of Part Give, and it’s also the Salem Overnight chapter which, up until last night, possessed one scene and nothing more. No more, I say. I added three more scenes and finalized a map that goes with this chapters–map, you say? Yep. I love maps. There’s a lot of mapping going on in this chapter, and that’s one of the reasons I have a scene called Planing on PEI, because I always know where my students are. What’s PEI? Look it up, you’ll find it rather easily.
With all this work finished I went back and renumbered all the chapters and the chapter title pages, and called it a night. Because my writing for the day was through. I’ve said it before: not all writing is writing. Sometimes it’s research, sometimes it’s creating characters, and sometimes it’s plotting out your novel by getting your chapters in line with what you’re thinking.
And right now I have a far clearer view of where I’m going.